I like the rough look on this one!
nice drawing!

love the composition, great!

The rough look is very nice indeed Good composition and nice colours! Please don't post more than one artwork / day because only one is displayed in the thumbnails list, so the other won't have the exposure it deserves
+8

i agree Diane +8

Thanks everyone! And thanks Diane for telling me about posting more then one per day. I posted a critique for someone else and realized it's not fair to critique without showing your own work so I thought I'd catchup and post a bunch at one.

And please: be picky! Tell me how his left hand is wonky and brused. The face is too dark...These are things I see now that I look at it again after about a year, but I'm hoping noone will notice because I'm too lazy to change it. Keep me honest!!

Peace

great work!!

Nice and rough. His left shoulder is somehow gone, and the left arm is a little bit short.
Cool.

Thorsten I just added the original pencil.The fingers of the hand usually reach about mid-thigh if you streatch them so I think the length is about right, but I don't like that hand and arm either, something is wrong with it. Too thick? The wrist is bent wrong? I should just draw a bush there!

this is great. the texture to the color is perfect - not too much and not too little.

cool stuff, the layout / colors / lighting all works. I cant complain

nice work

nice draw, it rember frazzeta works.
i look to the pencils draw and i think maby the colored version have to many contrast, that make the right hand a litle big of finger, over all it looks great.